Thursday, October 23, 2008

It lead me into a room that was dark
And eerie
And looked like havens arena
Notes of music, salsa-ing and balae dancing
In the ball room of my mind
The plaintive tunes went high and low
And moved to and fro
Glimmers of light lit up and blinked
And it let the music flow still
Into the glassy ocean of innocence

The keys black and white when
I played it sensuously
It led me into a room of
Fantasizing dreams and colorful

Like the dead ends when a music note
Finishes playing … it echoed with all mite
In the ears that longed for thirsty drops
In a quenching heart.


പി എ അനിഷ് said...

Your Poems are Good
Welcome to my blog

rinishriju said...

Nice one :-)

Winnie Panicker said...


Gautham S Nair said...


ചെറിയനാടൻ said...

ഭീതിജനകമായ അന്ധകാരത്തിലൂടെയുള്ള ഈ സ്വപ്ന സഞ്ചാരം നന്നായിട്ടുണ്ട്. അവസാനം, ഓരോ സ്വരവും ഓരോ ലോകത്തേക്ക് നയിക്കുന്നപോലെ, ഒരു പ്രതിദ്ധ്വനിപോലെ, വരണ്ട ഹൃദയത്തിൽ സംതൃപ്തിയുടെ കണികകൾ പോലെ!!!

കൊള്ളാം കുഞ്ഞേ, ഇതു മലയളത്തിലേക്കും പകർത്താൻ ശ്രമിക്കുക. I trust you can read Malayalam. Since you are writing in English I don’t have any condition or comments like it must be like this, it must be like that etc. etc. But as far as I concerned as a small English rhyme the theme, idea, craft and conclusion are nice and proves your quality.

All the best

W. Africa

Winnie Panicker said...

Hello Mr.Cherian..... thanks fr the comment...yes i can read malayalam....expecting more positve criticisms...rgds


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